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Shattered Silence by ~Mage-Master:iconMage-Master:



the sound of cicadas
break the silence
of the cool night air
nothing for miles
staring into the distance
seeing all of it

hopes for the future
shot down before fruition
dreams cease to be
before ever reaching reality

gazing to star filled heavens
at times like this
haunting memories
of a past resurface
transported back there
for the breifest of moments
which feel like endless hours

shattered confidence
with all things considered
breaks lesser people
suffocated by their own hand
ending it
escaping from it all

this cannot last forever
it has to be over soon
©2008-2009 ~Mage-Master
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Just something I came up with the other day. Tell me what you think it's about by leaving a comment.

Oh ya, any comments like "This song is crap, quit writing n00b!" will be flamed appropriately.

Don't think this needs a mature content warning, I don't remember there being any swears anyway.
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First name that comes to mind: "Shattered Silence".

The reason:
The overall feeling I get from this song is that someone is trying to maintain a sense of piece within their mind or heart.

But when they open their eyes and wake up, back to the real world, the horrors and hells of normal life destroys that peace and brings about the person's own self-destructive patterns, possibly to their demise.

--
To crumble into such nothingness
A despairing fate, for your lies
To pretend is the lunatic's legacy
Privileged to bolt the nails of heresy.

Angels and demons, a march man's bewildering host.
Love the title dude, I think you pretty much summed up the whole song in your reasoning too.

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This emptiness I've made my home
Embracing memories of dreams long gone
One last caress from the corpse of love is all I want
Underneath the cyanide sun
w00t. ^_^

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To crumble into such nothingness
A despairing fate, for your lies
To pretend is the lunatic's legacy
Privileged to bolt the nails of heresy.

Angels and demons, a march man's bewildering host.

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